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Old 4th May 2009, 09:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Anyone got any sites to review 作文? I always get a 33/34/35 for 作文 but never get any higher.

Or how about any sites for those 开头? Cause i dont know much and you dont expect me to use 一个风和日丽的早晨。。 -.-

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Try to do others besides narrative. I suggest 报章报道。

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do you need help? i am a kind chinese guy and i think i can offer some help
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Same i suggest this oso 报章报道
its much more easier since u are worry abt the opening .
And .. u can dun make ur story during the morning . anything in the evening or nite would be good too ?
but u got to see wad u wanna show in ur story .
try to keep the story timing to a short duration so that ur point will be clear =D
Example would be like ur whole 300words story would revolve only around 3 hours timinG? lol =X
hope this helps

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Old 13th May 2009, 06:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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But 报章报道 need to memorize beginning and ending right..

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there's no need to memorise so long as you're able to come up with it on the spot, which clearly many of us can't. so yeah. must memorise. :p

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hey. you need any help in 报章报道?
my ex-teacher gave me some sentence for 报章报道..
if you need, i can help you find!!

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I WANT I WANT ! Thanks so much man. I am better in argumentative and discussing ones like 报章报道, at least won't kill brain cells for 作文 haha.

Anyway just a question, is it possible to score FULL MARKS for 作文, 报章报道 all these...??

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wow i too need help on my chinese essays and it's only a few more days! D:
any help is greatly appreciated!

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Anyone got any sites to review 作文? I always get a 33/34/35 for 作文 but never get any higher.

Or how about any sites for those 开头? Cause i dont know much and you dont expect me to use 一个风和日丽的早晨。。 -.-
一个阳光普照的早晨。 at least it's a bit more deep than feng he ri li. feng he ri li is pri sch standard. lols.

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memorise the format.. and read more chinese newspapers.

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报章报道 is kinda easy!!

开头段
读了这则报道,我的感触如鱼骨鲠在喉,不吐不快。

原因
所谓 “ 无风不起浪,事出必有因 “ 到底是什么因素导致这种现象发生呢?以笔者个人浅见,原因不外是以下几点。

后果
若以上的问题不及时对症下药将导致以下的后果。

建议
所谓 “ 头痛医头,脚痛医脚。“ 若要解决问题,要先找症,然后对症下药,效果将事半功倍。

总结
所谓 “ 人非圣贤,孰能无过“ 。 只要知错能改,一切还是来得及的。千万别等到一事无捕的时候才后悔,到时候一切都来不及了。


I hope the above helps!!Rep me if it helps~~I took a a long time to type this you know..^^

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haish.. sometime bao zhang bao dao.. will not be able to use the frame..
Must depend on which type of bao zhang you writing..

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Re: Chinese - 作文

Originally Posted by LonerzBoy View Post
报章报道 is kinda easy!!

开头段
读了这则报道,我的感触如鱼骨鲠在喉,不吐不快。

原因
所谓 “ 无风不起浪,事出必有因 “ 到底是什么因素导致这种现象发生呢?以笔者个人浅见,原因不外是以下几点。

后果
若以上的问题不及时对症下药将导致以下的后果。

建议
所谓 “ 头痛医头,脚痛医脚。“ 若要解决问题,要先找症,然后对症下药,效果将事半功倍。

总结
所谓 “ 人非圣贤,孰能无过“ 。 只要知错能改,一切还是来得及的。千万别等到一事无捕的时候才后悔,到时候一切都来不及了。


I hope the above helps!!Rep me if it helps~~I took a a long time to type this you know..^^

Power, but I think for those whose keep getting 30 over point for chinese to remember all this will killed them ==

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as long as you take some time to memorise,all will come into your head de when you start doing~

Of course, you have to make sure it fits into the bao zhang bao dao..
You have to link it back with some of your own words..The above are only guidelines~

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Power, but I think for those whose keep getting 30 over point for chinese to remember all this will killed them ==
Originally Posted by LonerzBoy View Post
报章报道 is kinda easy!!

开头段
读了这则报道,我的感触如鱼骨鲠在喉,不吐不快。
(感触如鱼骨鲠在喉,不吐不快) ==> Feeling like fish bone stuck on my throat, don't say I felt unhappy.
I don't really know how to put in words, just get the meaning
(I find it unhappy if I don't report on this news after reading it)


原因
所谓 “ 无风不起浪,事出必有因 “ 到底是什么因素导致这种现象发生呢?以笔者个人浅见,原因不外是以下几点。
(无风不起浪,事出必有因) ==> No wind no wave, anything problems occurs sure has a reason behind it
What's the reason for some of this things to occur. As what I think, I find that "blah blah blah"

后果
若以上的问题不及时对症下药将导致以下的后果。
If you don't solve the above problem in time, the following "problems" will occur.

建议
所谓 “ 头痛医头,脚痛医脚。“ 若要解决问题,要先找症,然后对症下药,效果将事半功倍。
(头痛医头,脚痛医脚) ==> headache solve head, leg pain solve leg.(for fun - its only an example) in short --> 治标治本
If you want to find a cure to anything, you need to find the root of the problem, then work on the root so that things will be done much more easily.

总结
所谓 “ 人非圣贤,孰能无过“ 。 只要知错能改,一切还是来得及的。千万别等到一事无捕的时候才后悔,到时候一切都来不及了。
No one is perfect, if you know how to atone for your mistake, every problems are still curable. Just make sure you don't wait until nothing can be done then starts to regret, it will be too late by then.

I hope the above helps!!Rep me if it helps~~I took a a long time to type this you know..^^
Sorry but i try to translate it in my words, hope that you all could understand what it means =D

to LonerzBoy - I dun mean anything bad when i said that, sorry if u mis-understood mi.
And its really fatansitc to see sec 4 or 5 ( i mean u ) to be able to write like this.

OT abit ==> You stay around mi siol =.=" Lol =X

Good luck to anyone taking their MT O's lvl soon =)

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No problem~Afterall,just here to post and help ppl what i think is able to help~^^

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有些特变的回忆...................

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erm can i ask u guys a question? i will be taking my chinese o lvl next monday and i am kinda worried about bao zhang bao dao..we all know there are 2 types: positive and negative types of bao zhang bao dao..and there are different "formats" for the 2 types..but wat if the news article they give u is very ambiguous and u do not know which type it belongs to? how do u go about writing those type of bao zhang bao dao? one example is: "a recent survey found out that out of 25 schools in singapore, only 2 of them do not require their students to come back during the holidays for extra lessons, write down your thoughts"
if this type of question comes out, how do i answer it??? thanks

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negative lor..

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i stop revising already..
don't want stress myself before the day of exam..
I just spent 1hr 30mins chatting with my best friend on phone.
I play games..
Don't stress yourself too much..
no matter what question come out, negative/positive, just remain calm. (:
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bao zhang bao dao is consider flexible.. the frame not everytime can use..

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