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Old 19th March 2009, 02:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Chinese Bao Zhang Bao Dao!

Anybody have a sample of any topic written in bao zhang bao dao? got format de mah? (im kinna lousy in my chinese language>.<)

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Old 19th March 2009, 02:41 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I don't have any written samples, but I can show you a sample from our local chinese newspaper 联合早报.

The following newspaper report article is about the recent HOT topic of 6 americans being overcharged by a profiteering Newton Hawker Centre hawker.

收费过高 违反营业条规 “虎虾”海鲜摊执照吊销3个月

(2009-03-19)

● 杨荣发 陆彩霞 联合报道
 
  美国游客到纽顿熟食中心吃8只虎虾,竟得付出239元的事件已经有了调查结果。被投诉向外籍食客敲竹杠 的纽顿熟食中心海鲜摊位,因收费过高,违反营业条规,从下个月1日起将被吊销执照三个月。此外,该摊位助手 也被禁止在纽顿熟食中心工作一年。

  国家环境局昨天傍晚发表文告说,当局调查后,证实纽顿熟食中心第43号摊位“东陵第一站海鲜馆”(Ta nglin Best BBQ Seafood)因向食客收取过高收费,下个月1日起将被吊销营业执照三个月。

申诉被敲竹杠旅客感欣慰

  申诉被敲竹杠的旅客麦克利比(30岁,产品发展经理)已经回到美国俄勒冈州。他昨晚从本报获得违规的摊 位被吊销执照的消息后,表示感到欣慰。他相信这能向其他想违规收费的小贩发出强烈的信息,确保类似事故不会 再发生。

  他说:“我下回到新加坡时,再也不会光顾纽顿熟食中心了,因为新加坡还有其他价廉物美的美 食好去处。”

  麦克利比上星期六晚上9时和亲友一行8人到纽顿熟食中心,准备大快朵颐。他向“东陵第一站海鲜馆”点了 六人份晚餐。菜单上注明各种海鲜每100克的价钱。他点了8只虎虾、4只螃蟹、一只乌贼、一盘馒头、半只烧 鸡,以及白饭和啤酒。

纽顿小贩公会开会商讨

如何避免类似事件重演

  结账时,伙计告诉他们总共491元,让他们大吃一惊。麦克利比要求对方开单,列出各道菜肴价格。十分钟 后,伙计把账单交给麦克,他发现8只虎虾要239元、4只螃蟹169元,半只鸡19元。

针对这起事件,纽顿小贩公会秘书杜德培说,公会将召集纽顿熟食中心的小贩开会,探讨措施避免类似事件再度发 生。他表示,国家环境局已通知公会调查结果和对该小贩的惩罚,但他不清楚有关小贩被吊销执照的 原因。

  他也说,自从新闻见报后,熟食中心的顾客有所减少,但他无法估计减了多少。

  他也重申,熟食中心海鲜烧烤档售卖的虎虾有大有小,有些顾客要求小贩拿出体积最大的,但又不弄清楚售价 ,结果才会发生纠纷。

  对于小贩是否有责任主动提醒顾客秤重海鲜的售价,他说:“我们很难要求每个小贩这么做,因为每个人有自 己做生意的方法。”

  纽顿熟食中心有83个摊位,其中有20多个售卖烧烤海鲜。
Source: http://www.zaobao.com/sp/sp090319_502.shtml


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For 报章报道,
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first para: copy the qn to ur 稿纸,after that, 读了这份报道后,我感到感慨万端。
nxt few para: List down the 原因. Write your 原因 from these aspects: 个人,家庭,学校,政府,社会.
One para for each. Choose at least 2 aspects to write.

Then, you throw in this 俗语:所谓“冰冻三尺,非一日之寒”,以上的原因会导致严重的后果:

Write your 影响/后果 [Consequences] (depends on the qn). At least 2. 1 para each.

Thn you write your suggestion to the problem. At least 2. 1 para each.

Your conclusion (E.g. the qn is: 青少年太过依赖手机…) . 综上所述,青少年太过依赖手机是因为 (write your 原因.. the main points, then the consequences). And write abt your view to this qn.
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Can use this for most of the qns.

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Originally Posted by Iynaux_XY View Post
For 报章报道,
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first para: copy the qn to ur 稿纸,after that, 读了这份报道后,我感到感慨万端。
nxt few para: List down the 原因. Write your 原因 from these aspects: 个人,家庭,学校,政府,社会.
One para for each. Choose at least 2 aspects to write.

Then, you throw in this 俗语:所谓“冰冻三尺,非一日之寒”,以上的原因会导致严重的后果:

Write your 影响/后果 [Consequences] (depends on the qn). At least 2. 1 para each.

Thn you write your suggestion to the problem. At least 2. 1 para each.

Your conclusion (E.g. the qn is: 青少年太过依赖手机…) . 综上所述,青少年太过依赖手机是因为 (write your 原因.. the main points, then the consequences). And write abt your view to this qn.
--
Can use this for most of the qns.
俗语:所谓“冰冻三尺,非一日之寒, This phrase is much overused. Try to get more creative ones that you can memorise. Because if so many people use, the marker will get sian of it.

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ogmogmg!!! tyty so much! i will copy them in my notebook and memorise them

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Or maybe we can write 所谓“无风不起浪,事出必有因” before the 原因 part

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just go buy a book about that and memorise the format and some chim words.

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Originally Posted by Iynaux_XY View Post
For 报章报道,
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first para: copy the qn to ur 稿纸,after that, 读了这份报道后,我感到感慨万端。
nxt few para: List down the 原因. Write your 原因 from these aspects: 个人,家庭,学校,政府,社会.
One para for each. Choose at least 2 aspects to write.

Then, you throw in this 俗语:所谓“冰冻三尺,非一日之寒”,以上的原因会导致严重的后果:

Write your 影响/后果 [Consequences] (depends on the qn). At least 2. 1 para each.

Thn you write your suggestion to the problem. At least 2. 1 para each.

Your conclusion (E.g. the qn is: 青少年太过依赖手机…) . 综上所述,青少年太过依赖手机是因为 (write your 原因.. the main points, then the consequences). And write abt your view to this qn.
--
Can use this for most of the qns.

个人,家庭,学校,政府,社会. is supposed to be applied to solutions. How can these aspects help to solve the problem. Another aspect is the media, like newspaper,radio and TV, which is 媒体 in chinese.

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个人,家庭,学校,政府,社会 can also cause the problem stated in the question..
For suggestions can also use these 5 aspects .

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personally i feel that the most important thing when writing bao zhang bao dao is know the format and fill up your content. you dont need to throw many many chim words in, just make sure you have written what the question wants you to fufil.

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yea i do agree! the trick lies with the format and i tnk the suggestions and reasons for alot of bao zhang bao dao are almost similar and can be recycled lol! but of course some chim words will add marks for u..

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Nt really nd a lot of chim words... ... What i suggest is that u read 联合早报, 社论 aka the forum section. Learn the vocab frm there

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Yeah , read more newspaper , listen to news . I believe that some schools have printouts how to answer certain types of questions . Mostly related to problems around us .

For example:
- 校园暴力:May be physically , mentally or by verbal , which actually come in many forms . It may happen between students-students or teacher-students .
- 新加坡是不是一个优雅社
- 温室效应: Global warming .
- 学生自残:self mutilation .

alot more . For secondary school levels , they usually ask such questions . Good thingabout Singapore paper is you can predict the questions . Since it's not JC level , they will not ask anything too difficult .

Most importantly , you need to have a very good opening . There is some simple ways which you can follow:
- 校园暴力:
校园暴力是个常有的事。 在每一间学校都无法逃过这个残忍的事实。许多学生多少都有类似的经历。 校园暴力有很多种,例如:肢体上的伤害,被同学们用言语侮辱他们等等。
This paragraph is to give an overview about the title . No need to be very detail , cos you will include them in the body paragraphs. Just give some examples will do .

In the body paragraphs , you need to answer these question which are similar to your English composition . The 3W and 1 H .

For this title , you will need to address certain issues . - What happen to the students ?
- How it happen ?
- Why it happened to them ?
- When such things will happen to them ? etc .
- What will it lead to ?

All this should be enough for about 2 to 3 paragraphs . The main thing is you need to elaborate . Let me show you how to do it .

通常被欺负的同学大多数都是那些和别人与众不同。他们可以被他人殴打,对肢体上动粗。 这样做可能会引起学校的骚动,应此他们换别的方法实行校园暴力。
Just 3 sentence , i have already answer why these students got bullied . How they got bullied and what lead to other types of bullying .

You need at least 3 paragraphs to support your topic .

For ending , closing statement with own opinion and suggestions to solve such problems . This is one of the most important part on how you score .

But of course ,your language also play a part . If your sentence don't make sense or sounds funny , marks will be deducted . Please make good use of your dictionary . I know if you cannot recognise the words , it will be hard to find the correct words too .

That's why you got to read more . Writing an essay is not about using bombastic vocab , but of course if you use , that will be a bonus . Keep it simple .

and give statistic if possible .

Your essay need to be minimum 2 page plus . So you got to plan it properly . You will need to address individuals , as a community , country or international if possible .
I can't be typing the whole essay here but for this topic , i will put some important keywords to help you .

代沟- generation gap .
肢体- body
侮辱- insult
自残- self mutilation
沟通- communication
自卑-

That's about it . I hope it helps a little . Jiayou !

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Originally Posted by Iynaux_XY View Post
For 报章报道,
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first para: copy the qn to ur 稿纸,after that, 读了这份报道后,我感到感慨万端。
nxt few para: List down the 原因. Write your 原因 from these aspects: 个人,家庭,学校,政府,社会.
One para for each. Choose at least 2 aspects to write.

Then, you throw in this 俗语:所谓“冰冻三尺,非一日之寒”,以上的原因会导致严重的后果:

Write your 影响/后果 [Consequences] (depends on the qn). At least 2. 1 para each.

Thn you write your suggestion to the problem. At least 2. 1 para each.

Your conclusion (E.g. the qn is: 青少年太过依赖手机…) . 综上所述,青少年太过依赖手机是因为 (write your 原因.. the main points, then the consequences). And write abt your view to this qn.
--
Can use this for most of the qns.
my chinese teacher every paragraph also got those kinda of like 俗语 thingy

idiiotpiiggy added 3 Minutes and 55 Seconds later...

actually theres a book on bao zhang bao dao
you can look for it in the library
our sch ask us buy last year
and we need to read it
quite useful


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Originally Posted by idiiotpiiggy View Post
my chinese teacher every paragraph also got those kinda of like 俗语 thingy

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actually theres a book on bao zhang bao dao
you can look for it in the library
our sch ask us buy last year
and we need to read it
quite useful
Buy those books are usually useless as there are so many news around us , you can't be sticking to al those sample essays . Best is to do newspaper cutting to collect related news on certain issue .

It's good to read on sample essays , providing they don't steal the idea etc . That's why teachers don't really reccommend only buying that . Best is to write the essay base on your own standard then trying to follow a perfect one .

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erm. i guess for bao zhang bao dao mostly is not about the format but the content. the first sentence just copy but the rest try not to use those "standard" phrases that you'd expect teachers to ask their students to copy or memorise. basically they don't like to read "mass-produced" answers. try to go along this line and you should be able to do well for chi. (: trust me.

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