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Old 3rd September 2013, 09:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey guys,

I found many of you ask about how to write 报章报道 here. I will give you some suggestions here.
I posted an article here yesterday, but it is gone. Anyway, let's start again.

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There are two kinds of 报章报道. Let’s start with the FIRST one.

The question is like this: first, it provides a phenomenon which is not good, then asks what your opinion is.
For example, a question is 根据一则调查半数国人认为新加坡人很不友善。谈谈你对这则新闻的看法。(According to the investigation, half of our citizens think that Singaporeans are not kind. What is your opinion about this.)


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Now we start to write the essay.

1.Repeat the phenomenon and give your opinion.

最近我看到一则报道,说半数国人认为新加坡人很不友善。看到这则新闻我感到很失望。

If it seems too dry, can add one or two sentences like this:

在生活中,我也看到过很多国人不友善的现象,比如在搭巴士时,有的老人行动比较慢,有些年轻人就很不耐烦地 催促。我们新加坡正努力建设一个优雅的社会,我们应该努力改善这些不友善的行为。

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2.Transit from beginning to the reasons

为什么有些国人表现不友善呢?我认为有以下三个原因。

3. Give the reasons why some Singaporeans are not kind. Three reasons are enough, but divide them to separate paragraphs.

Every paragraph is written in this way:
i. Topic sentence
ii. elaboration/example
iii. conclusion

第一,在现代社会里,每个人都面临不同的压力。(topic sentence)学生有学业的压力,工作人士面对职场的压力,父母有教育孩子的压力。在这些压力下,每个 人都忙于自己的事情,凡事较少站在别人的角度来考虑。(elaboration/example)因此,一些新加坡人对待别人的态度就不够友善了。(conclusion)

The other two reasons I only provide the topic sentences, you can try to write elaboration and conclusion.

第二,很多父母亲只关心孩子的课业成绩,而忽视了对孩子品德的教育。
第三, 很多学校花在对学生品德教育的时间比较少,也不够重视品德教育。

You may try to find the reasons from three aspects: society, family (parents) and school.

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4. If things get worse and worse, what will happen? What’s the bad result?

国人不友善地对待别人所带来的负面影响是很大的。其一,从小的方面看,国人没有互相友善地对待,那么我们就 没有好的生活环境。其二,从大的方面看,如果国人不能友善地对待别人,那么就不能很好地合作、团结,那么我 们新加坡就很难发展。另外,我们的旅游业也会受到影响,因为没有人愿意到一个不友善的国家旅行 。

5. Transit to the solutions to stop the phenomenon.

那么,我们要怎么才能改变国人的想法,让新加坡人能够变得更加友善呢?

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6. Give the solutions. Compare to the reasons you mentioned. If the reason is the parents ignore something, the solution can be what the parents should do.

Every paragraph is written in this way:
i. Topic sentence
ii. elaboration/example

首先,父母是孩子的第一任老师,在孩子的品格教育中扮演着重要的角色。父母应该从小教导孩子要有爱心,要关 心别人,不应该自私。培养他们正确的品格观念。父母也不能纵容孩子,发现孩子有品德问题,就要及时地纠正教 育他们。

I just show you the topic sentences of the other two solutions. You can try to extend them.

其次,学校应该教育学生要跟同学团结友爱,要尊敬师长,教导他们做友善的新加坡人。

再次,社区可以组织各种活动,让居民们有机会相互了解,互相帮助,激发居民们的爱心。一些媒体,比如电视、 报纸、网络要多多宣传团结友爱,增强国人友善地意识。

最后,我们每个人都应该时刻提醒自己,友善地对待别人。


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7. We come to the end of the essay. If we all do our bits, our country or the society will be better and better.

我希望国人都能够改掉自私的想法,多站在别人的角度思考问题,友善地对待别人。我们的社会、学校、家庭和个 人都能尽自己的一份力量,我们的新加坡一定会成为一个城市美,人心更美的国家。


I hope this can help you. Tomorrow I will talk about the other kind of 报章报道. Some good sentences for compo will provide later.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask me

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